Didn't want to submit this right away and wanted to wait and finish the rest of the pages for this scene (which are mostly inked and need to be screentoned and such) but I submitted the first page to hear everyones opinion.
It is my first try of making comic pages like this, it's not really out there yet but I will try to do better starting of the next scene of this chapter.
The comic will explain Aya's first arrival at Mugen-High but this first scene is a bit random, it was meant to show a bit of Aya's usual day in her "normal" life.
This comic in general exists for me to practice my skills of making comics and trying out new stuff I am not yet used to.
Hopefully I finish the rest of the pages for this scene soon.
Any more tips that can help me are very welcome!
PS: Pages in Serbian will be posted here: PSS: You read this LEFT to RIGHT
You're off to a good start > u <)b I like the fact that it starts off with how she went about her "normal" life, instead of said character doing what they're doing and almost out of nowhere something suddenly happens, resulting in them arriving at Mugen. lmfao. As always, I like the details * v *)9